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Aomera
2007-03-20
ch 1,
abuseit's really lovely lozzy. sad but good. not sure about the last three line ' He fought for England...He fought for you' you could just end it on 'My Daddy did just that.' I think it would be more powerful, but up to you! Really well written lovely Lozzy :)
ADSpencer
2007-02-28
ch 1,
abuseNicely done. It tells a very interesting story.
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