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AweshumBooksh 2009-09-24 . chapter 6
Great story. Just wondering, are you going to keep updating? Hope you do!
Lillian Marie 2009-07-31 . chapter 6
i really like it, i can't wait to read what happens next.
Lillian Marie 2009-07-31 . chapter 2
it's good so far, i really like it.
ghurl00 2009-07-20 . chapter 6
Wow.

that's all i can say.:)

oh and update soon. Hehe:)

great story:)
lecabe 2009-07-16 . chapter 6
great story. too bad it looks like you dont plan on continuing it :'(
Flaming Skys 2009-02-07 . chapter 6
This is really good... Though I am sad to see it's been more then a year since you updated.
Oh well...update soon?...
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pretitiful 2008-12-11 . chapter 6
man. it would be really great if the admirer was jason. but somehow i doubt it will be. maybe its scott. .
pretitiful 2008-12-11 . chapter 4
yeah. i like the story but the main chick kinda annoys me. but hmm. doesn't really matter.
i dont like her twin sister. she's nasty.
pretitiful 2008-12-10 . chapter 1
oh. i like the first chapter.
:)
sherbetsi 2008-11-24 . chapter 6
this is really good.. but you know you need to update soon. and hey seeing as iv enjoyed all your work here so far.. have a gold star ( em, be a favourite )..
Hi! 2008-11-02 . chapter 6
Kay so, I rarely EVER review and I'm usually even less apt to review if the author complains about a lack of reviews or says, "I need this many reviews before I update" or they're like, "BLAH REVIEW!!" but um, I just have to say... I really liked your story... a lot, and I see it's been a while since you've updated so I just wanted to send a little encouragement in the hopes of a new chapter soon!

Um, something that's actually like.. review worthy hahah, I noticed that in the first few chapters when everyone is younger you have Jason acting pretty mean to Jamie but then all of a sudden they're older and he's really nice to her and they're actually friends. So, I don't know if you were going to go more in depth with that later on or not but it's kind of... odd, but you're a good enough writer where I didn't really notice it until after I had read all of your chapters, so just a small little thing that you might want to explain. Like, how the dynamic between Jason and Jamie changed. Other then that it's quite a sound story and I'm really liking it so far!
Are.theee 2008-06-19 . chapter 6
HELLO? WE'RE WAITING OVER HERE!
Jainblu 2008-06-03 . chapter 6
I just read all six chapters, they're amazing.
I don't believe you when you say you're only a semi-author, seriously, you're like a Demi-Goddess... um, fully blown goddess, I dunno. Ur a mind blowing-ly wonderful writer.
^_^ Th he, i just used alliteration. Yay!

I can't wait til' your next chapter, I actually love all the characters, even Jess...
Okay maybe not so much...
meh! What can you do...
anyway waiting for your nenxt chapter... make that salivating in wait...
oh let's try for some alliteration
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oh I've got it
Simply Salivating in wait, which I guess is kind of gross, but what the hey

So yeah; Simply Salivating in Wait
Lola

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missguineapiggy 2008-05-23 . chapter 6
update plz! i really liked this story
BananaPhone 2008-04-23 . chapter 6
hey you havent updated this in a gazzillion years, plz do, i love it :)
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