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| guin x H x 2007-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abusevery deep,huni,very deep xx |
| forgotten-magick 2007-02-26 ch 1,  | abusethis was really good. it's sort of ironic, but my friend and i were just discussing the things people tell you, the pretty little lies. sometimes i wish we could believe them, even for a little while. ugh, dark ponderings. anyway, nice poem. all your stuff is so well written. |
| amillionlittlepieces 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseStrikingly bitter. I like how there is no punctuation, it lets the reader read the poem at their own pace. I also like how you put certain words on separate lines. |