|Reviews for one sad love song|
| Fading Memories 5/18/07 . chapter 1
I liked that. I thought it was so simple, and yet so meaninful. And that feeling... not being able to forget, it just hurts way too much, doesn't it? And you expressed it really well.
| CynChan 2/27/07 . chapter 1
This should become a song. Or at least out there. because it's so true. I like your style; it's very interesting (the hyphens and italics).
I like the powerful verbs: sheltered, break, built, left, move on, ache, etc.
Great job again :)
| rikufanattic 2/25/07 . chapter 1
I applaud you. One sad love song, I guess we've all felt like that once in our lives, or more. I know I have, so congrats on the poem, I love it.