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High Sky 2007-04-11 . chapter 1
Good poem. Great rhyming scheme, although the rhythem was a little shaky at times. Loved the topic, I can relate.
Fantwriter 2007-02-25 . chapter 1
i like o.o has a lot of stuff that i think about ...

(format's kinda odd to read tho but that's your choice)

I like this part: "I wish I could die I wish I could fly Drift into the sky Just by closing my eyes I wish I could just be Free

Snap my fingers And dissapear And reappear Anywhere but here"
cuz of the flow and the rhyming, and just cuz of what it says ^^
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