I think the end of the seventh line should be "inflation" - as in price inflation.

Apart from that, an interesting take, and the lumpiness of the "tion" sound really appeals to me. Last line: laugh out loud.

I aplaud your prowess in not repeating a single "tion" word except for "nation"

luv, Sa

ha thats quite good. the fact that u managed to keep that rhyme going without it seeming to forced is very impressive!