 Sarrasanne 2007-05-14 . chapter 1Thnx 4 th r&r
I like this. It leaves so much space for imagination, colour and description with just the bare-bones dialogue. This little snpashot of life isn't something I would usually write - but it struck me as been humorous and light, without being fluffy. I think the indecisivness is the best part - it gives every different reader his or her own interpretation. A personal, yet applicable-to-anyone anecdote.
luv, Sa |