Ahaha wow.
I'm pretty much loving this story so far, even though rach and Wes are weird.

Ahaha, wow.
Great chapter. :D

i really really liked this story.
it made me laugh a lot, and it was adorable.

firstly can i just ask u WAT did u mean wen i said we eat spiders...like, when we're sleeping, they walk into our mouths, or we unconsiously pick em up n start chewing..? *shudders* I HATE SPIDERS! *shudders again*

secondly, luvd the ending

naww, poor caleb. tho i do like wes better xD

I just finished reading your story and I found it amazing. I loved Rae and Wes. Especially Rae because she's so crazy. But besides me loving the story it was very well written.
Love silent-CRYS-

aw its so adorable! I love the clumsiness factor that Rae has. I thought that Wes didn;t move because of his grandfather, but because he was involved in gang activity, and had lied to Rae, but I guess I was wrong. But it's funny how alike they are. Keep writing!
- Christina

love it.:)) it was a great story:)

lmao "shouldn't you guard her life or something?"

Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed in forever! I really like this so far. I am. Interested to see what happens next. Btw, not el taco bueno, but taco bueno is a fast food Mexican place. Haha

Haha. I totally feel connected with the main charrie because we are almost the exact same... Except that I barely pass as 5' 2"

Poor girl, tripping over. But Aww! Good story!

Huzzah, fun story! Well, all of your stories that I've read so far have been fun, but I'm notoriously (or, more to the point, not-so-notoriously) lazy about reviewing, so I fear I haven't told you that nearly enough.

Anyway, the character of Rae was very easy to identify with - finding guilty pleasure in romance novels and random usage of unusual vocabulary are traits I share. Solid writing throughout, with more than decent grammar (loved the who/whom debate, as this is a highly neglected issue that people should be more aware of).

Also, I think that Rae would fit in quite well in New York City. Her complaint about people not getting the humor of sarcasm would not be a problem here. New Yorkers have sarcasm down to an art form.

... And this is why I'm lazy about reviewing. When I start, I have trouble stopping. Fear me and my long-winded opinion-ness!

In conclusion: Good job all around.

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!

I love her character! She is like me in so many different ways. Though I don't think I would have just laid on the ground after I tripped, haha.