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lovingstar
2008-05-02
ch 23,
abuseI love it
xiao16
2008-04-27
ch 21,
abuseI read your author's notes at the end of this chapter and I totally jumped up and down because I went to a Marianist high school. AND I was in marching band.

I also really like this story. Sometimes Rae isn't very likeable (because she can be SO stupid about stuff) but it makes the story much more believable. Thanks for writing it, it's really good.
oh y'know.that girl
2008-04-25
ch 23,
abuseGreat story! i really like Rae's sarcasm, it sort of reminds me of myself.
Autumn Reflections
2008-04-25
ch 23,
abuselove love love love love you.
Evolet Blue
2008-04-20
ch 23,
abuseI just read the whole story even though I have school in about five hours, oh but nevermind. I absolutly loved it, Rea is awesome and Wes is so sweet. Rea reminds me of me so I LOVE HER, lol. No but really, the story rocks, and original. Thank you for writing it! love&peace
Realistic Dreams
2008-04-20
ch 3,
abuseAha. The death thing is another similarity.

Once I had escargot in the third grade. From what I remember, it didn't taste as bad as everyone expected...

Haha I liked the ending to the chapter. You make me laugh, in that good/happy way.
Realistic Dreams
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseHey there. Well I was looking at the list of nominated stories from the last skow (congrats on your win, by the way) and ended up clicking the link. Are you a big fan of Sarah Dessen or just the Truth About Forever? It really is an amazing book. It's one of my favs, too, so I guess I can relate somehow to both the main character and you. Your Wes also seems to be modeled after Wes from TTAF (physically, anyway). Both are 'sawon' worthy. Haha, well, I'm off to read more of your story.
ladygirl1324
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusei just realized - did we ever find out the name of the main character? maybe im just spazzing out but whatever.

and jesus ur such a great writer! i love the characters and the setting and the way you put things. amazing job.
im gonna go read the next chapter now. :)
Emerald123
2008-03-31
ch 23,
abuseaw MOREMOREMORE!
Emerald123
2008-03-31
ch 8,
abusenoo they argued! that shud b illegal. ah well g2g. read this again soon!
Emerald123
2008-03-30
ch 2,
abuseLOL i love ur story. fantastic writer, fantastic story.
Lalaith7
2008-03-18
ch 15,
abuseso, I know the next chapter is already up and therefore the trivia contest isn't really on still, but the answer is totally superman and I was so proud of myself for knowing that I had to answer. I thought I should drop you a line also to let you know that I'm reading and liking this fic. I especially like the way Rae is awkward and makes such random often wrong comments because although I wince when she says them, I can also totally recognize myself in that part of her. So I like it because it really makes her feel more realistic. And she doesn't come off as lovestruck as some heroines, but at the same time i think if I ever had a crush on a friend I wouldn't melt into a mush blob despite my love of chick flicks, but I think 'd be a bit more logical about it like Rae.

Anyway in summary:
Superman and I like your story
RandomByStander
2008-03-14
ch 1,
abusethe first thing that caught my
eye was the name 'Wes' used
for one of the characters.
haha, isn't that a name from
one of Sarah Dessen's book? : )
I hope this story will be
as good as Fateful Friday!
simplicity is complex
2008-03-10
ch 23,
abuseWAH. i like (:
cherrypiesizzle
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story x)
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