I have to say that I'm really enjoying your story. It's to find someone who uses first person well - giving the character a distinct voice and at the same time giving the reader enough room for an objective view of the person telling the story.

I also can attest to the fact that crazy coincidences like this do happen in real life, and your characters are adorable.

As usual...it is Unique...!!
You really are a profoundly gifted writer..!! :))

Omg I loved it :D And the ending, it's good. ahahaha. I don't know what else to say, so uh, yeah. Bye.

Wow. I cannot tell you how much I love this story! First of all, I really disliked Rachel's character at certain moments. Her quirkiness and her random moments were great but I got so mad at her when she picked fights without knowing it. The development of her character amazed me. It wasn't in your face like some authors do when they attempt character development, it was gradual and you slowly notice. That is probably my favorite thing about this story. Wes's character = love. Rachel and Izza's friendship was wonderful because it showed that friendships aren't just smooth rides, especially ones that are as tight as their's. And Rachel's bonding with Mike and Emma? LOVE IT! Anyways, I'll end this now before you get tired of this review. XDD Great job!

Ahaha wow.
I'm pretty much loving this story so far, even though rach and Wes are weird.

Ahaha, wow.
Great chapter. :D

i really really liked this story.
it made me laugh a lot, and it was adorable.

firstly can i just ask u WAT did u mean wen i said we eat spiders...like, when we're sleeping, they walk into our mouths, or we unconsiously pick em up n start chewing..? *shudders* I HATE SPIDERS! *shudders again*

secondly, luvd the ending

naww, poor caleb. tho i do like wes better xD

I just finished reading your story and I found it amazing. I loved Rae and Wes. Especially Rae because she's so crazy. But besides me loving the story it was very well written.
Love silent-CRYS-

aw its so adorable! I love the clumsiness factor that Rae has. I thought that Wes didn;t move because of his grandfather, but because he was involved in gang activity, and had lied to Rae, but I guess I was wrong. But it's funny how alike they are. Keep writing!
- Christina

love it.:)) it was a great story:)

lmao "shouldn't you guard her life or something?"

Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed in forever! I really like this so far. I am. Interested to see what happens next. Btw, not el taco bueno, but taco bueno is a fast food Mexican place. Haha

Haha. I totally feel connected with the main charrie because we are almost the exact same... Except that I barely pass as 5' 2"