|Reviews for Smooth Move|
| bananasplit175 2/28/07 . chapter 1
Yay, new story. I love book stores, but I also love coffee shops. I'm not sure which I like more, but anyway good start! : )
| lalalala 2/27/07 . chapter 1
wow, i have the book "the truth about forever" right in front of me D i just started the book so nothing too interseting is happened right now.
HAHA, i just realized that i mixed up the Wes in your story and the Wes in Sarah Dessen's book... oops. No wonder.. i was like, of course she should kno him! He catered at her house the other day and freaked her out!
heh, anyways, i'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story! )
| Lady Wrye 2/27/07 . chapter 1
Ahh, I love all the books you mentioned :)
What a wonderful story..I'm already in love with Wes..(It's probably just because of my bias with The Truth About Forever and the character Wes..)
Great job on the first chapter!
| xPink Blossomsx 2/26/07 . chapter 1
Ooh I like it. ]. That chapter was funny. Please Update!
| iwishillwilluponyou 2/26/07 . chapter 1
ah yay! finally a new story _
| Sally Can Wait 2/26/07 . chapter 1
OHMY-FRICKING-GOSH IT'S ABOUT TIME.
I adored it.
Characterizationfewalkgj, as usual, totally one of your strong points. I love the protagonist. And Wes. And you, for finally posting this.
I can't wait to read more. So post it soon.
By the way, SARAH DESSEN RULES! So does Pride and Predjudice. And the movie had an AMAZ-ZA-ZING ending. And the Odyssey IS SO SEXIST. OMG. BUT LOL! From the story "The Day Some Squirrels Got High" on my favvy list, this girl wrote this poem about it.
"Odysseus slept with women
that weren't his wife
He was unfaithful
And therefore he was smite."
That still cracks me up. Anytehoodles, where on earth is the "reply" button? How do you get to it? :O
| jekodama 2/26/07 . chapter 1
YAY! You're BACK! Yuppie! Yahoo! I liked this introduction, the girl reminds me of myself when I was 17, except I was a dwarf and EVERYBODY was taller than me, but her attitude made me remember myself as a teenager. Wes seems to be a smart hottie!
Until the next review!
| Meeesha 2/26/07 . chapter 1
Absolutely awesome. I personally liked your rather true jab about The Odyssey. It made me laugh. I really like the start of this. It seems as though things shall get very interesting. )
| Singingperson 2/26/07 . chapter 1
AGH, I have to wait a week to read the next chapter!
I LOVE this story.
I can't wait to read more.
| InspiredByAKiss 2/26/07 . chapter 1
I can't believe she just stayed on the ground like a dead person, lol :D ! I'd jump up and run away to go... crawl into a hole. :)
Frappucino's.. sounds good. I've never tasted it I think. That's because I live in stupid BELGIUM where we have ZERO Starbucks. But I live there when I'm in London or Paris :) Always White Chocolate Moccachino's. (L)
Wes seems okay so far. I just really hate the name 'Wes'. Although I used to hate 'Zach' too and now I'm reading this story where the boy with that name is a hot jackass, and I'm starting to love the name too. So maybe it'll grow on me.:)
Aww, I love romance stories too. I'm going to search for this Sarah Dessen book sometimes... but there are a lot of books that I can't find where I live. There's a great bookstore in Antwerp, but that's still almost an hour drive away and I'm too young to drive a car... So I resort to -gasp- downloading eBooks most of the time. It's the only way to get my fix, lol.
And I disagree that it's a law for every girl to love P&P. ;) I dislike both the movie and the book. I'm probably alone in this though:D
Soo anyways, I hope you update soon! Adding this to my fave's.
| dreamer 2/26/07 . chapter 1
awesome first chapter!
| dimethylmercury 2/26/07 . chapter 1
Wow... actually I was really sleepy, but I decided to read this and I'm glad I did! haha.. I'm sorta like her, like to read a lot too(: Fortunately, I have never fell flat onto my face before... I liked the part were she thought they were boy/girlfriend(: Hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| pop-yur-fcukn-collar 2/26/07 . chapter 1
Heyy! OMG! I love this! It's so good... I'd prob have walked away from knocking something over but lying in the carpet works... It was funny... Lol... Update soon!
| Miss-Scissorhands 2/25/07 . chapter 1
Okay, good start. Hated-HATED-the language (I know, you're just trying to show the reader that she's a trashy girl, but still). But I'll put this on my Story Alert list for now. This has potential and I want to see where it goes. :)
| Chocolate Herrings 2/25/07 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh. Um...I hang out in bookstores all the time. I have never bought a book at Barnes & Noble, but I will go and sit on the (very uncomfortable) floor, reading, for hours. I've never managed to run into a cute boy though... Once there was a really annoying guy... He was really dense. I kept putting my book in front of my face and he kept talking to me... ugh. Uh. Right. Your story. Obviously going to be good since it started out in a bookstore. Plus, you're the author. I'm looking forward to updates.