oh my gosh that was so cute, i actually mean it. I loved how it was narrated by a person that was watching the little "confession". I usually like long stories, but this one-shot was just really sweet and fluffy. Please keep putting up more of your work, i can't wait to read more of it.

that was gosh! Amazing :D

ooh! that is cute! this is the first story i ever read that someone is narrating, a character narrating and it is actually really good!

loved it! it was so cute! and i love the fact that it was set in what is my dream book store!

aw... so sweet!!

Sweet. There's something about watching a story unfold through eyes that aren't involved in what's going on that I like. Very nice.

AW!that's so sweet, especially since I read the prelouge (or somewhat prelouge) just before this one. And then reading this one put an insanely huge smile on my face and really made me go, "Aww!" Keep up the good work! :)

Aw. That...was so...CUTE! And I love the way you wrote it from the perspective of a bystander, rather than one of the two kids as most people would've done. It makes it unique and even more adorable. (:

Anyway that was great, I loved it! Good job.

that really made me smile.
thanks!
daydee

Great one-shot! It's so cute and fluffy...did I mention cliche?

Very creative! ^^

it's an original POV. nice :]

This is one of the sweetest stories I've ever read. I especially love the last couple of lines.

Did you just make a cliche realistic-like?! I think you did...

Wow.

Beautifully written.