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Oh. 2009-10-30 . chapter 12
:P Write moer plox.
Oh. 2009-10-30 . chapter 6
I Love your stories.
Words.Love.Music 2009-10-20 . chapter 29
Klasse Story!!
Hab gerade auf deinem profil gesehen, dass du aus Deutschland kommst, dein Englisch ist aber sehr gut :)
I Murder on Impulse 2009-10-05 . chapter 29
Aww such a beautiful story!

xx
Ali
Casablanca Dreams 2009-09-18 . chapter 29
This story was amazing! I loved how you managed to blend these cliches (Ceri's past, Caden's personality + the death of his mother, the pregnancy) but still have a completely original plotline!
xx.Crimson Butterfly.xx 2009-09-07 . chapter 29
I reread this, and just realized that you put up an epilogue! It's unfair that i've been missing out on this for 6 months :O I loved it, but it doesn't really seem like a closure. The ending makes me feel like more is coming after it. I think that the chapter before this was a suitable ending, and that you should maybe make this a oneshot or something :) but i still love it
Boo 2009-09-06 . chapter 29
an amazing, captivating and awesome story!
Penny Jones 2009-08-17 . chapter 29
I found this on the SKoW website so I read it, and wow. I loved it. It was a romance but it wasn't a happy-go-lucky one like so many are on here. So, congratulations and great job.
rebelforever 2009-08-13 . chapter 29
I just finished reading all of your story. I was so engrossed in it that reading was mostly all I did for two days. I really loved your characters and if you ever did write about Lio that would be awesome.
ephemeral 2009-08-10 . chapter 29
Hi again!

Its been such a long time since I've read anything outstanding in FP. I don't review very much, but I must say that your story deserves a hell lot more attention. I love how all your characters are consistent, and the depth of their feeling protrayed in one POV. To your awesome beta: Great job!
I'll definitely read your other works :)

Thanks for sharing your story, and keep writing~
ephemeral 2009-08-10 . chapter 15
Hi there,
I noticed a flaw in this chapter :-

"Caden raised her brows." -its the part where Ra was asking to look at the songs Ceri had written.
I'm pretty sure its quite a huge typo, had to reread a few lines cause I thought I missed something ^^

Your story looks extremely promising btw, and I'm loving it :D
HelloWonderland 2009-08-06 . chapter 3
So far, I'm loving the story. It's interesting - I thought that it would be one of those "girl falls in love with guy, guy doesn't know that girl loves him, he secretly loves her but doesn't know it yet" kind of scene. But, it's actually out of the norm. I love Nanna, especially her little endearments in French - cool thing is that I can understand it. Who knew those long classes in French could actually prove to be productive? Hahaha. Congratulations on the SKOW Nomination, by the way. :)
akaCHEEKS 2009-08-05 . chapter 29
finally finished reading it! i love how you portrayed their close knit relationship!
taintedlove13 2009-08-04 . chapter 29
Okay, I'd first like to say congratulations on writing such an awesome story. I absolutely loved it.
Next,I'd like to apologize for not reviewing each of the chapters. I was fortunate enough to find your story, and ever since then I've read it non-stop. So, instead of being a good reader and clicking that "Review this Story/Chapter" button, I chose to click next and zoom to the next installment. I'll try to make this review long to make up for all the ones that I didn't submit.
Once again, I'd like to state how much I liked this story. NO, not liked, loved. When I read the prologue, I wasn't sure. People expressing their feelings make me fidgety and uncomfortable, and Caden was laying his heart out. I decided to give the first chapter a try, though, and was surprised to find that I'd been so absorbed that I'd clicked the next button until I was on chapter three.
Ceri's and Caden's chemistry was fabulous. When they hurt for each other, I hurt for them. When Caden got distant, I wanted to yell at him. When Ceri tried to push Caden away, I wanted to beat her in the head until she grew some sense.
I knew Ceri was pregnant way before she knew it, but I think you intended for it to be that way. With all the sickness, exhaustion, and moodiness, who wouldn't have guessed it?
The only thing that I had a small issue (not a big one) with in the story was the repeated endearment "little one". For me it seems like something that people wouldn't really say that often, but these are your character's, and you're the one who created who they are.
Okay, this isn't nearly as long as I wanted it to be, but I can't think of anything else to say... except to reiterate that "The Melody of Love" is effin' fabulous. I definitely enjoyed it.
-taintedlove13
nahbia 2009-08-01 . chapter 18
Hi! Love the plot so far, love Caden & Ceri... :)

However, I did notice that (in my opinion), some of your similes are a little too much- ie. "her eyes were like cold lightening"...

However, overall, I do love your writing style! Keep up the great work.
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