I love reading this story. It gives me such chills!
You are such a wonderful writer.
:)

Scintillatingly sensual- a refreshing combination of philosophy and sex, with well developed characters and a well contructed scenario.
Nice.
Erisah

One word to describe it:

Passion

Ooh. I really like the new scenes you added. I liked it a lot. =D And still, your writing will never fail to put me in awe and amazement. The description is so vivid. Truly wonderful. =)

-Mel

wow, great story! i loved the first bit in the woods, although the second bit was great too hehe

keep writing, this story was practically perfect.

so this was a one-shot? if it was im upset, the characters actually sound real and i love the name royce on a guy! bloody brilliant, the writing was awesome and as for the rest of it...well, i think you can figure out that for yourself (winks) lol :D