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Tytherpol
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusepretty damn amazing.
i hate the last line, though. cheapens the whole thing.
the whole strand of 'me' rhymes is a little bleh too.
but all-in-all killer thought/poem.
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2007-04-01
ch 1,
abuseI am so there.

The only thing that bothers me with this poem is that there is no caps...but that's just a pet peeve of mine. xD

Anyhow, thanks for the review!

Rowan.
Amanda Rhode
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem. Kinda reminds me of the past year, in a sense.
BTW, thanx for the review.
darkink1991
2007-02-28
ch 1,
abusedamn. I'm so down right now that is really deep nad actually made me feel a little better htat i'm not alone in feeling that way about god. i like it, and i realy like the way you write.
waterwind
2007-02-27
ch 1,
abuseit's great. i like it
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