One for my favorites. The rhymes were very smooth.

-Ramen

another great idea... however i think that in the line "the future is oblique" you should have "the future is opaque" it goes better with the following lines "its proceedings blurred- and yet it's reflected - in the pendulum's gaze" also i think that the line "They know is to come" is missing a word. (if it's "what is to come," i suggest changing it to something a little less cliche).

Nice. :)

I'm not going to go on about structure and all that stuff because I'm a dud when it comes to poetry. I've never written it, but I have found that I enjoy reading it. I liked it, it really gave me a clear image of what was going on in my mind.

Anyway... Later.