 Taltush/MeiMei 2007-02-26 . chapter 1I'll admit that I only looked at this because of the words "polar bears" and "penguins" (two of my most-loved animals). However, now that I've read it, I find it... interesting. It's a bit strange and disorienting (kind of long), but it's also very pretty and meaningful. While at the beginning the exclaimation points were a bit much and there were some overly dramatic parts, it's well written and it's nice. Plus, it has a great title (always judge a book by its cover/a poem by its title)! Anyways, nice job. |