|Reviews for Addictive|
| Midnight In Eden 3/26/07 . chapter 1
Okay, technical things first. If the first line is your title and not part of the poem, at least bold it otherwise it gets a little confusing. Also, don't start line three with an "and", starting sentences with them always feels a little wrong.
It's a little repetitious but I think if you fleshed it out a little more it wouldn't matter as much.
I think though you could kill the "addiction" on the third to last line though easily.