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XOXO Cullen Twins 2009-11-21 . chapter 21
absolutely ADORE this story! Seb's comments are SO funny, they remind me of stuff I say lol
the sex scene wasn't horrible at all :) It was hilarious also. I especially loved when Madsey was talking to Abe (fountain thing) and the "What are you doing?""YOu" that cracked me up so bad.
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-13 . chapter 21
Great epilogue :)

I can't wait for the sequel!

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-13 . chapter 20
YAY! HE PROPOSED! AND CAME BACK!
THAT'S TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-13 . chapter 19
He gave up that easily?! You'd think that since he loves the girl he would fight harder in order to be with her :/

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-13 . chapter 18
OMG! Poor Madsy! I would be scared poopless!

... She is probably even more scared than that though :/

Too bad that she has to go through all that poop that is called the Lowlands. ://

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-13 . chapter 17
My reactions to the ending of this chapter (last couple sentences):

(FIRST) WTHeck?!

(SECOND)... -thinking- ...

(THIRD) OH! I get it.

(FOURTH) YAY! GO MR. BEAR!!

:D

Off to read the next chapter! :D I'm excited to see what will fix everything :)

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-13 . chapter 16
OMG! Poor Madsy :(
And Poor Seb. He is going to beat himself up about it through and through... :(

~Mo~
songofmylife 2009-11-13 . chapter 21
i absolutely loved this story.
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-12 . chapter 9
Gosh. Fern ruins everything!

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-12 . chapter 8
xD

Why does Seb act like that (all pushy and whatnot) if he knows (he just knows things, remember?) she doesn't like it?!

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-11 . chapter 3
WOW

Now if that doesn't sound crazy, i don't know what does!

But... It's a great idea! I can't wait to finish the story :)

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-11 . chapter 2
xD

I love the list at the end xD

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-11 . chapter 1
Mr. Pop was wrong, Nolan hurt her too :(

~Mo~
Mare11 2009-11-08 . chapter 21
OMG i loved your story. I love your imagination. Wish i had that type of imagination. Keep it up. and Seb i must say sounds so sexy hehe 10 thumbs up
hoplessromantic21 2009-11-04 . chapter 4
this fic is cracking me up so much lol i love what a perv seb is haha and i love how his like not from this world the whole storyline its awesome *keeps reading so addictive lol*
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