OMG i loved your story. I love your imagination. Wish i had that type of imagination. Keep it up. and Seb i must say sounds so sexy hehe 10 thumbs up

this fic is cracking me up so much lol i love what a perv seb is haha and i love how his like not from this world the whole storyline its awesome *keeps reading so addictive lol*

love this story so much! it's awesome!:D its as if i'm there.:D well done! keep writing!

i love it..

Loved it!

oh LOL. i think there were some typos but other than that a very entertaining chapter. hope to get more on the "inner forces". atm, it sounds like starwards or something from china mieville.

fantastic! great story, you had me crying a bit when he left... but all is good now.

wow! that was a fantastic story, i throughly enjoyed it!

I've been at this story for about a week seeing as I'm only allowed to use the internet during the weekends. But enough of that. I'm here to tell you that you have created one heck of a story! This is absolutely amazing. I cried. I laughed. I got **. I got mad. I got amazingly giddy and I got very imaginative. It's amazing. This could be a movie. And i swear it would be big. A fun character driven story.

Eros was great city that I'd wish was real. I love the concept of the birthday parties. It's cool. I wish that was real.

Sebastian Bear is one hot dude based from what I've read. He's charming, sweet, perverted at first but very very loving. I admired him in Chapter 17 and 18 where things were taking it's toll. If I had a chance to pick the guy I'd be destined with, It'd be someone like Seb. Whenever I mention the name Madsy, it feels like I'm invading something special. I don't know. :))

Madeline Hunter is another story. I love her attitude. Her fiery aura. She's an amazing protagonist I must say. I sometimes wished I was her. I can't believe I'm saying this but I'm jealous of the character. She was so strong and very wise than she knows. She is practically the strongest of the characters emotionally. Both She and Seb. Though Seb wasn't all that stable sometimes with his mood. Madeline did grow though in the end and I liked that.

Adorable little David Michael. How could I forget? I'd love to have a sibling as equally smart and loving as him. He's so adorable I want to pull him out of the story and keep him mine.

Someone who I'd never forget in these stories too are Ezra an Amelia. They were so alike it felt like Ezra also became Mortal. They were so alike. Amelia with the sensing moods efficiently and Ezra with the whispers. Both of them having broken hearts and being extremely giddy. I'm pretty sure that if Ezra was mortal, they'd be mistaken as twins. :))

This has been a long rant already. I can't believe you're still even reading this but anyway, Thank You for this story. It showed me that Real love comes in the most unexpected time and that you don't have to search it. It'll come to you and defeat all the odds against it. No matter how big or cruel it is. And I needed that sense. Again, Thank you and good luck on future works and on your SKOW award. :)

So far Sebastion reminds me of how i pictured Edward cullen being in his spare time when i read twilight . . . .
They're both pervs

I love your story so far!

I love this story so much :D

Loved it!
:)

great story really really nice .
i liked how the charecters gradually become more sentemental .
good luck

ahahahahaha i am officially hooked

i love it

its so funy

great job

o im starting to like this :D