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darknessblooms 2007-02-27 . chapter 1
Great question...what IS love? Just a couple of corrections: "newboard baby" --> newborn baby; "not just part" --> not just a part.

The repetition of "love is" was nicely integrated into the poem - it's not too much that it overwhelms you; there was just the right amount of emphasis. Nicely done.
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