|Reviews for Notepad at Night|
| Elle Morgen 4/3/07 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness! This just spoke to my heart! I love this little ditty, it is so clever. The funny thing is that I keep a pen and notbook under my pillow in case I think of anything during the night or when I wake up. You are a kindred spirit. I envy your girlfriend! Great job.
| simpleplan13 3/25/07 . chapter 1
I TOTALLY relate to this... its awesome...
| truthordeal 3/9/07 . chapter 1
Finally, a poem on FP that I can understand and relate with! I like the abcb rhyming scheme and the rhythm you use in your poem.
| darknessblooms 2/27/07 . chapter 1
I can completely identify with this feeling. Sometimes I wish my memory was good enough, that it can just accurately and securely store a mental Post-It note of lines until I get up the next morning.
Just a minor correction: "Back into to a doze" - get rid of either "into" or "to."
The rhyme is nicely done, lending the overall piece a smooth, consistent flow. Well done.