Oh my goodness! This just spoke to my heart! I love this little ditty, it is so clever. The funny thing is that I keep a pen and notbook under my pillow in case I think of anything during the night or when I wake up. You are a kindred spirit. I envy your girlfriend! Great job.

I TOTALLY relate to this... its awesome...

Finally, a poem on FP that I can understand and relate with! I like the abcb rhyming scheme and the rhythm you use in your poem.

I can completely identify with this feeling. Sometimes I wish my memory was good enough, that it can just accurately and securely store a mental Post-It note of lines until I get up the next morning.

Just a minor correction: "Back into to a doze" - get rid of either "into" or "to."

The rhyme is nicely done, lending the overall piece a smooth, consistent flow. Well done.