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smile for the sunshine 2007-07-19 . chapter 1
That was really good and really creative. I liked that. Good work!
saccharinemisery 2007-03-29 . chapter 1
Haha. Hi! I'm Hannah from reviewers_found. I know this is kind of late but hey, I'm back to reviewing now. =))

Anyway, this is cool. Haha. If you had just scribbled this down during Math period without realizing it then, whoa! You're a natural writer^^. The idea was interesting although I think it was a bit.. short. Haha. Sorry, I'm used to reading long ones. =P

So, there. :)

Oh. && the last stanza was awesome.
a bitter kiss. 2007-02-28 . chapter 1
Oh my God. It's Maths. Parallel... perpendicular... oblique... skew! AH!

Now this was a powerful poem - and it uses concepts - MATH! MATH! - that aren't too common.

Haha, hey, I liked this. :D
Taltush/MeiMei 2007-02-27 . chapter 1
It's an interesting poem, inspired by something, yes, a bit random, but it's still intruiging. I rather like it. It's very different from most poems. Nice job.
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