Beautiful. I especially love the line about melting frozen dreams, yet you're immediately thrown into fantasies... Wow.

I liked how everything connected in that poem.

SirScott

And a very romantic arson it was. Loved it.

Good work choice. Good poem. I like the phrase "romantic arson".

:Isabella May:

This is lovely. Your lack of puncuation annoys me a bit...but that's just me.

Rowan.

I like this one alot.

it's very strong, and vivid.