wow...

im confused.

Do I laugh... or simply smile?

Mob

Oh... my... God! I love it! This was sadistically hilarious!

just a little disturbing, eh?
haha, i liked it anyway, especially the last line, it was kinda unexpected. thought that main body was more like S&M stuff, rather than killing someone.

Is it wrong to say that this made me laugh?
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The last line just took me by surprise. (You'd think the title would be sufficient warning.)
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Still loving it,
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R. Louise

Ew. Nice imagery, but... ew. For some reason, I think of Phantom of the Opera.

Great job, though. I liked the title and idea for this poem.

nice tone with the sharp imagery and wording, especially the beginning(it really sets the mood for the rest of the poem). it's vague and strange and yet i love it.