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Arctic Ookami
2008-05-13
ch 14,
abusex3 Sweet~ Keep it up! =D
Just Breathing
2008-05-13
ch 14,
abuseGreat story!
I have to say... Liam is probably my favourite character at the moment. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters with him. =] And I know this is completely and totally whack of me to say, but I hope Damian does something to Will... Like, suck him dry?

...Yeah, I don't like him.

Any doodles! Update soon!
Twilight Starr
2008-05-13
ch 14,
abuseIt does look like the crap hit the fan. Things aren't looking good for her certainly. Nice addition. Have an amazing day.

~Twilight Starr~
drownyouout
2008-05-10
ch 14,
abuseI love this story! Do update soon. (:
Eve's Deception
2008-05-05
ch 14,
abuseOh my gosh amazingness! I need more!
x3life
2008-05-04
ch 14,
abuseomg totally just started reading this story...
and i love it!! =)
shes so awesome.. and everyone totally loves her... includeing me!! yay.. haha
Silent Will
2008-05-02
ch 14,
abuseYou're right, this WAS a plot driven chapter. Sounds like Dahlia has just landed herself in a difficult spot. Two people telling her to do completely opposite things and both are threatening something very bad if she doesn't comply...doesn't sound too fun.

Oh yes, I also didn't notice a single typo. It's a miracle I can read a 3,0 word chapter (mine included, unfortunately) where there isn't a single mistake, never mind giant ones like these.
Tumble-and-Fall
2008-04-30
ch 3,
abuseHello, I've not been around for a while lol, been busy, so when I eventually managed to get back to this site I needed something decent to read so thought I'd pick up where I left off with your story ;). I liked this chapter, and your writing is very descriptive. I especially liked the line 'my thoughts not exactly where they should be'. Don't know why that stuck out for me, but it did. Well, I'm off to carry on reading.
insomnias worst nightmare
2008-04-30
ch 14,
abuseI'm really enjoying your story! I hope you update soon!
I really like your characters, and I'm glad to hear there is going to be more Callum and Liam!
Update soon!
Freakage
2008-04-28
ch 14,
abuseI really hope you continue this! I'm super hooked. At first I was hesitant as it seemed a little Anita Blake-ish at first but I was wrong because this is a very unique plot and set of characters. Thanks!
inkling
2008-04-26
ch 14, anon.
abusewho. UPDATE.
Sexy vampirechick
2008-04-22
ch 10,
abuseHaha..I managed to finish this chapter within this hour.Yippy for me! I guess I'll give my eyes some rest now.The reason I took so long to read you chapters is because my eyes get extremely tired if I stare at the screen too much,so it takes me sometime to just finish one chapter.But today I feel utterly happy that I could .. hehe :)
Sexy vampirechick
2008-04-22
ch 9,
abuseAnother wonderful Chapter by Carmel March! Way to go.I'm going to read the next chapter really soon. I hopefully by today or tomorrow. :)
RedMoonChick
2008-04-21
ch 14,
abuseshould we be trying to "get your lazy butt into action" now?

update this fab story!
Fidelity394
2008-04-20
ch 14,
abuseOh i always love your chapters and im sorry for not reading and reviewing sooner... i just updated and i hope you update soon too
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