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| Arctic Ookami 2008-05-13 ch 14,  | abusex3 Sweet~ Keep it up! =D |
| Just Breathing 2008-05-13 ch 14, | abuseGreat story! I have to say... Liam is probably my favourite character at the moment. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters with him. =] And I know this is completely and totally whack of me to say, but I hope Damian does something to Will... Like, suck him dry? ...Yeah, I don't like him. Any doodles! Update soon! |
| Twilight Starr 2008-05-13 ch 14, | abuseIt does look like the crap hit the fan. Things aren't looking good for her certainly. Nice addition. Have an amazing day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| drownyouout 2008-05-10 ch 14, | abuseI love this story! Do update soon. (: |
| Eve's Deception 2008-05-05 ch 14, | abuseOh my gosh amazingness! I need more! |
| x3life 2008-05-04 ch 14, | abuseomg totally just started reading this story... and i love it!! =) shes so awesome.. and everyone totally loves her... includeing me!! yay.. haha |
| Silent Will 2008-05-02 ch 14, | abuseYou're right, this WAS a plot driven chapter. Sounds like Dahlia has just landed herself in a difficult spot. Two people telling her to do completely opposite things and both are threatening something very bad if she doesn't comply...doesn't sound too fun. Oh yes, I also didn't notice a single typo. It's a miracle I can read a 3,0 word chapter (mine included, unfortunately) where there isn't a single mistake, never mind giant ones like these. |
| Tumble-and-Fall 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseHello, I've not been around for a while lol, been busy, so when I eventually managed to get back to this site I needed something decent to read so thought I'd pick up where I left off with your story ;). I liked this chapter, and your writing is very descriptive. I especially liked the line 'my thoughts not exactly where they should be'. Don't know why that stuck out for me, but it did. Well, I'm off to carry on reading. |
| insomnias worst nightmare 2008-04-30 ch 14, | abuseI'm really enjoying your story! I hope you update soon! I really like your characters, and I'm glad to hear there is going to be more Callum and Liam! Update soon! |
| Freakage 2008-04-28 ch 14, | abuseI really hope you continue this! I'm super hooked. At first I was hesitant as it seemed a little Anita Blake-ish at first but I was wrong because this is a very unique plot and set of characters. Thanks! |
| inkling 2008-04-26 ch 14, anon. | abusewho. UPDATE. |
| Sexy vampirechick 2008-04-22 ch 10, | abuseHaha..I managed to finish this chapter within this hour.Yippy for me! I guess I'll give my eyes some rest now.The reason I took so long to read you chapters is because my eyes get extremely tired if I stare at the screen too much,so it takes me sometime to just finish one chapter.But today I feel utterly happy that I could .. hehe :) |
| Sexy vampirechick 2008-04-22 ch 9, | abuseAnother wonderful Chapter by Carmel March! Way to go.I'm going to read the next chapter really soon. I hopefully by today or tomorrow. :) |
| RedMoonChick 2008-04-21 ch 14, | abuseshould we be trying to "get your lazy butt into action" now? update this fab story! |
| Fidelity394 2008-04-20 ch 14, | abuseOh i always love your chapters and im sorry for not reading and reviewing sooner... i just updated and i hope you update soon too |