|Reviews for Dancing With an Open Heart|
| shadowpreistess 2/27/07 . chapter 1
I love this one what was your inspiration
| CrazyTurtles 2/27/07 . chapter 1
It is very hard to look inside your own heart at times. Good job show that.
| a silenced revolution 2/27/07 . chapter 1
"Realizing that they won’t part
and their souls can’t be bought."
I think it would make the rhythm better if you changed "won't" and "can't" to "will not" and "cannot". Also in the last stanza "difficult" might be better for the flow of it. IMO.
Otherwise, I like.
| mgs 2/27/07 . chapter 1
Aww, this is a nice sweet poem.
| Ashelin 2/27/07 . chapter 1
Interesting. A lot to think about. Having an open heart is important, but you also have to make sure you know who you are. I think this was really good. Great job, and God bless.
| Which Mistake am I 2/27/07 . chapter 1
I like this.