The title for this is just gorgeous and makes me think of a boy I once saw who had poetry in his eyes and made me wish I could just learn his name. I think what I like the most is how the short lines add a roughness to the poem which emphasizes the feelings of pain.

"I cant say its not my fault, but when i look at you i scream out verses to peoms (i once wrote, once knew). I was so beautiful."
"Till i throw up blood and memories and suffocate on what we were in my dreams (a copycat of those old movies we used to watch. my dear, my dear)" Those were the prettiest. I havent reviewed anyone in a long time.. so I forgot how to give constructive criticism. :). I liked it.

I love the feeling in this poem; it flows nicely and is just one strong feelng after another. the title was very catchy, and some of the phrases were great, my favourite was 'cause I'm to righteous for razorblades'. The style where some words are in bold, italics or underlined does not appeal to me much but this poem is just to good to be ignored.

this is lovely, i must say. it starts out with that cliche "and", but, goodness, it's a gazillions times better than any old poem. in fact, i don't think it's cliched at all and i don't know why i fell for it, but i did. i loved the ending, and the whole flow you had going seemed very much right with the words. but the ending was undoubtedly the best.

I'm not really into poetry that doesn't rhyme but I really felt the bitter hatred revealed in this. I love the imagry shown especialy in lines 1-5.

I would recommend punctuation, though.