You like hurt!Reni stuff, don't you?
And Amon kind of reminds me of Batman. I don't know why, but he does.

Mental image = Psychiatrist Amon: “And how do you feel about that?”

With all the angst in this story, you'd almost forget that most of the characters are special agents...
~K3k

Quick question: if Sonia can't see, speak, or hear, how can she hear her boyfriend's laugh through the cell phone?
~K3k

I liked that; it was very easy to follow. I enjoyed Soniya's character; I hope to see more of her. I loved the library
~K3k

What no angst? Who are you and what have you done with AOK? (^^)Aside from that, very interesting, but you keep adding so many people, it's hard to keep them all straight. I did enjoy the diagrams (I remember them!)
Kepp up the good work
~K3k

Informational chapters are good. They help me figure out what's going on. Ah, color symbolism, brings back memories of freshman year...(death and apples XD)
Keep up the good work dear,
K3k

You should consider taking up writing horror stories; the dream sequences were sufficiently creepy. And isn't there and angst category on FP? It would fit this story a bit better. ^^
~K3k

Everyone seems to be getting along 'wonderfully'. I'm under the impression that it's Amon's turn on you wheel of torture. I'm glad Robyn's okay. ^^ She's a sweetie. (BTW, I got a new e-mail address: , just so you know).
Keep up the good work,
K3k

That was incredibly depressing. And it was a cliffhanger. You're a sadist. ^^
Keep up the good work.
~K3k

Pleasant. I'll trust that you've got a good reason behind that one.
Keep up the good work!
~K3k

Poor things; getting sick is bad enough without having telepathic powers.
Keep up the good work!
~k3k

Samara's power can be that she has a 100% accuracy when firing a gun. The bug scene reminds was funny; sort of reminded me od drama camp.
Keep up the good work!
~K3k

My, your girls are very talented. They can shoot, use magic/achelmy, and they can do back hand springs. Impressive.
Your fights scenes have improved, this one was a lot easier to follow, but the ending was still a bit confusing.
Keep up the good work!
~K3k

Oh dear, that was quite a decision that was thrust upon poor Robyn. She nust really love her job (or the people she works with).
~K3k