Is this complete yet? I hope not. It's pretty good.

Update soon

wow this is so good

you do an incredible job of writing characters.. just yeah. very good

--Alex

I love this!
Great plot with also good character development is really hard to find, and you have both.
Also, thanks so much for reviewing my piece, it means a lot. [:

Again, this is very well-written and realistic. I could really relate to Dean, and I loved the descriptions of the bass lessons. I think there was one mistake, though:

"...right over the goalie and into the net of the other team."

From the sound of how people reacted, it seems more like he scored on his own team.