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Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 9,	abuseThis chapter made me really cry. Again, I hate Chloe and I can't wait until Dylan gets full custody of Amy. Because he will, right? He better. I feel so bad for him and Amy. =( I liked the change of POVs. =)
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 8,	abuseDid I ever mention how much I LOVE Amy and want a girl JUST like Amy? She is adorable. And so damn smart!
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 7,	abuseFirst - So when is the steam coming for this story!? I'm getting really impatient. LOL. Second - I liked what Dylan said to Keeley to let her know that he understood. Third - I HATE CHLOE! Ew.
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 6,	abuseAnother favorite chapter of mine (they all seem to be favorites, don't they?) I like how they both admitted it in their own ways that it would happen someday. That's funny, I was thinking of a new story today (not that I want to start another one yet) and I don't know why but the whole "eye color changes with different moods" kind of thing popped into my head. And then I read this and it was just so awesome. That was a really good idea.
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 5,	abuseAww, I felt so bad for Keeley! Men like that make me SO mad! Erg. I really hate how they can be so heartless. I don't understand it. (Btw, I'm not insulting your story or anything... Just Mark.) Send Keeley my sympathy and hugs.
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 4,	abuseI love this chapter too. It made me laugh, smile, all that happy stuff. LOL.
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 3,	abuseOmgosh, this chapter brought tears to my eyes. Know why? Because it KILLS me when I see a dad like that. It really does. Especially when it's a daughter involved, not a son. But this chapter was the main reason I kept reading.
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 2,	abuseThat was a real cute beginning. LOL. I liked how they both misjudged each other first.
Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 1,	abuseSo I started reading this one too so I'm going to review. Actually, I started reading and then I couldn't stop so I just went on and on without reviewing because of how addicting it was, but now I'm going back and reviewing. =) I really liked the preface. Vocabulary and all, it was really good. I loved it.
Jayjack 2008-07-24 ch 9,	abuse:'( no not Amy. she's so adorable. interesting plan she had. update soon? stupid Chloe. can't she just leave?
Dreamless_Infinity 2008-07-18 ch 9, anon.	abuseSuch sad chapters... The different POV's was nice, especially Amy's. Are you going to show what happened at dinner, or continue on with the story? ~Dreamless~
Qzie 2008-07-18 ch 9,	abuseNO! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO A MILLION TIMES NO! You can't make Amy live with that witch of another letter! I won't let you! TT_TT Give a court trial that will burn Chloe at stake! OK, so maybe that's going to extremes. Mumbles "Not like we'd hate you for it." ^^'' Ahh, I couldn't remember what happened, so I've spent the last few hours rereading the story and fell in love with it all over again. The different POVs made me so excited because man... Jason and Amy are fascinating. And poor Amy! Being forced to grow up like that. Man... your little kid characters are so cute. There were a couple grammar mistakes in the beginning, but nothing too obvious. And yes. You are evil. You're collaborating with Satan, aren't you? :D Kidding. Chat later! ^^ -Qzie And yes, you are evil.
batzmaru 2008-07-16 ch 9,	abuseThe writing from Jason and Amy's POVs was pretty cool. It's nice to know what the other characters are thinking and how they view the main characters.
Duncan 2008-07-15 ch 9, anon.	abuseI think this has got to be one of my favorit chapters so far. I really liked the way Jason's POV was written. Good job, and MORE PLEASE.
Dreamless_Infinity 2008-05-17 ch 8, anon.	abuseWow, this chapter was full of chemistry! I loved the phone call at the end! Since I'm not registered on fictionpress, I can't vote in your "Not Quite Poll", but my vote is for number 3- Yes, however many sequels as seem fit. How can Keeley watch Amy during they day when she has school? ~Dreamless~

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