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| explosion of planes 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abusei like this espicelly the line 'my pain and blood poured into rhymes' sounds like a song if you ask me |
| angel953 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseluv sux doesnt it lol nice job on this |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseGod, Sam... you're amazing. I agree with the last two people completely. I like how you repeat "I love you I loath you I need you Don’t want you All of them at the same time..." |
| Ziren 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, Sam ... This one's really moving to me. I adore the way you write - everything just flows so naturally with a steady beat. |
| XShadowxWolfx32X 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseIt is so, well I can't think of a word to describe it but it was awesome. Keep writing |