cute.

Great story I loved it! Nice ending too, you could probably make some sort of sequel or however that is spelled having to do something with the baby thatd be cool and id read it

Rei

i badly want to know what she is gonna say. please dont keep us waiting to long.

Holy Hell he flipped his lid... I LOVE IT!

Rei

. . .couldn't swore I was still logged in. . oh well. ..anywhom god chapter I feel bad for Dante. But probably as they were saying the problems of the immortals don't go away very quickly. . .

aww. . .I was hoping you actually updated. . .o well. . .

good job, you got me hooked

i like this story so far...

i'm starting to get confused but i get confused easily. it's a pretty good story so far and i'll look for the update.

wow that was good. by the way there are sometimes a second person word when it should be first person. Like it says him instead of I.

that was an... interesting.. point of view. Slightly confusing. Nice lemon, though. Keep at it! _

Nice. Lol. I don't know why, but I like lemons...Lol. Ever since I wrote my own. Lol. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Kiwi

Wow that's awsome update soon! I have a new story by the way. It's called Spirit of Death. read it will you it i don't get many reveiws.

sounds good

aw, how romantical... and stuff. Lol nice, dante still sounds hard-assed, which is a good thing lol _ keep writing!