Great! No, Fantastic! The subject is, at least. Who am I kidding? This is well-written too. A SIX out of SEVEN.

I found it interesting! It seemed to have a good flow also.
One or two spelling mistakes, and is all supposed to be one paragraph? Its a little short for my taste, for a complete work but i like the general idea, however it did leave me starving for details about her life and the nature of voices themselves.
I did enjoy it though!
J.C