Great poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.

Twilight Starr

creepy. very creepy. but creepy in a beautiful way. :)

Those darn emos :).

Good poem, it sounds a little like song lyrics to me. Or, I could picture it as such.

It is strange how we desire that which we kill us. Any way this was one of your better poems.

SirScott

Wow, that was really awesome! I loved how you described everything, like a heart shaped coffin and thorn covered noose. Great job!