Great poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~

creepy. very creepy. but creepy in a beautiful way. :)

Those darn emos :).

Good poem, it sounds a little like song lyrics to me. Or, I could picture it as such.

It is strange how we desire that which we kill us. Any way this was one of your better poems.

~SirScott

Wow, that was really awesome! I loved how you described everything, like a heart shaped coffin and thorn covered noose. Great job!