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| Vapex 2007-02-28 ch 1,  | abuseHm... Since it's one shot... It's pretty average... Nothing that makes me go wow... Quite boring and dramatic actually... Reminds me of a soap opera episode... Haha.. Oh yes by the way... When people get into a car accident, doctors don't really put them on wheelchairs... They're suppose to be on stretchers... That made me laugh when I read wheelchair... LOL Cheers Vapex™ |
| Musicalfreak 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abusei liked it! it reminded me of this email thing i got. um...but, yeah...I don't know what else to say! however i really liked how you described the moment she died, it gave me this...inspiration for this supposed story i'm writing. That kind of sounded like i was going to steal your writing, and i'm not! i swear! but...i'm not sure how to explain it...hm, well, great job! |
| hello there lovely 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseaww so sad! :'( |