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| Abysmal Tr3pidation 2007-04-24 ch 1,  | abuseThis is an absolutely amazing poem. "Repairing the bumps, bruises, and cuts along its edges." I especiaaly loved that line. I also enjoyed the last line, simply because it was a positive conclusion. Keep writing. ~**~Indiana~**~ |