This my friend, is brilliant!

wow, VERY nice, i liked it so much i don't really know what to say

Dark theme; I'm very familiar with this particular topic: it fits right in with the way I've been thinking lately. Your writing is spectacular and the way you captured the scene and its emotion is truly captivating.

this is so wonderful, love it, love it , love it.

are you sure you are 14?

i like the confusion in the poem..it is so nice.

KUDOS.

I love this!

Does not sound as if it from a 14-year-old at all!

beautiful!

It made me want to read in fast pace and try to keep up.

Like the world around me was spinning too fast & I had to read this poem in order for it to stop!

Beautiful rhythm.

It flows just perfectly.

But, not in the fairy tail way.

In the I-want-to-die type way.

Amazing, amazing job.

Erica Sky

I love this one! I've never read anything like it.

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I really, REALLY, REALLY liked this one... It's deep...and definently one to add to a favorites list. I cannot really describe what I am even wanting to say. Shall I say wow?

how bout that. For lack of better words, Wow.

Bloody hell, that was just plain awesome!

Good luck!

holy mf jesus this is the best thing u have ever written!

love. love. love it.

beautiful work!

the way everything flowed was just so beautiful.

I really love the line, "The silence is too loud" I love how it is counterdickting but ture. Idk, I just love lines like this. Great poem!

wow...this makes me think jumbled...i hopw thats what you where going for...

this is great. I loved how it goes!

Surreal. I love it!

-Izzie May