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| tesa131313 2007-06-19 ch 1,  | abuseThis my friend, is brilliant! |
| Xriny 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abusewow, VERY nice, i liked it so much i don't really know what to say |
| Black Alya Wolf 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseDark theme; I'm very familiar with this particular topic: it fits right in with the way I've been thinking lately. Your writing is spectacular and the way you captured the scene and its emotion is truly captivating. |
| rebellious spirit 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abusethis is so wonderful, love it, love it , love it. are you sure you are 14?? i like the confusion in the poem..it is so nice. KUDOS. |
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Does not sound as if it from a 14-year-old at all! beautiful! It made me want to read in fast pace and try to keep up. Like the world around me was spinning too fast & I had to read this poem in order for it to stop! Beautiful rhythm. It flows just perfectly. But, not in the fairy tail way. In the I-want-to-die type way. Amazing, amazing job. ♥ Erica Sky |
| Camilleta 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI love this one! I've never read anything like it. |
| Living.My.Life.My.Way 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuse... |
| Dragracingqueen 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI really, REALLY, REALLY liked this one... It's deep...and definently one to add to a favorites list. I cannot really describe what I am even wanting to say. Shall I say wow? how bout that. For lack of better words, Wow. |
| Kyubak 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abuseBloody hell, that was just plain awesome! Good luck! |
| commemorativemisery 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseholy mf jesus this is the best thing u have ever written! |
| alluring lies 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuselove. love. love it. beautiful work!~ the way everything flowed was just so beautiful. |
| CrazyTurtles 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI really love the line, "The silence is too loud" I love how it is counterdickting but ture. Idk, I just love lines like this. Great poem! |
| braindead1345 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abusewow...this makes me think jumbled...i hopw thats what you where going for... |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abusethis is great. I loved how it goes! |
| a silenced revolution 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseSurreal. I love it! -Izzie May |