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tesa131313
2007-06-19
ch 1,
abuseThis my friend, is brilliant!
Xriny
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abusewow, VERY nice, i liked it so much i don't really know what to say
Black Alya Wolf
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abuseDark theme; I'm very familiar with this particular topic: it fits right in with the way I've been thinking lately. Your writing is spectacular and the way you captured the scene and its emotion is truly captivating.
rebellious spirit
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abusethis is so wonderful, love it, love it , love it.
are you sure you are 14??
i like the confusion in the poem..it is so nice.
KUDOS.
Toxic.Industrial.Waste
2007-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI love this!
Does not sound as if it from a 14-year-old at all!
beautiful!

It made me want to read in fast pace and try to keep up.
Like the world around me was spinning too fast & I had to read this poem in order for it to stop!

Beautiful rhythm.
It flows just perfectly.
But, not in the fairy tail way.
In the I-want-to-die type way.

Amazing, amazing job.


Erica Sky
Camilleta
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseI love this one! I've never read anything like it.
Living.My.Life.My.Way
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuse...
Dragracingqueen
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI really, REALLY, REALLY liked this one... It's deep...and definently one to add to a favorites list. I cannot really describe what I am even wanting to say. Shall I say wow?
how bout that. For lack of better words, Wow.
Kyubak
2007-03-04
ch 1,
abuseBloody hell, that was just plain awesome!


Good luck!
commemorativemisery
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseholy mf jesus this is the best thing u have ever written!
alluring lies
2007-03-02
ch 1,
abuselove. love. love it.

beautiful work!~


the way everything flowed was just so beautiful.
CrazyTurtles
2007-03-01
ch 1,
abuseI really love the line, "The silence is too loud" I love how it is counterdickting but ture. Idk, I just love lines like this. Great poem!
braindead1345
2007-03-01
ch 1,
abusewow...this makes me think jumbled...i hopw thats what you where going for...
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2007-03-01
ch 1,
abusethis is great. I loved how it goes!
a silenced revolution
2007-02-28
ch 1,
abuseSurreal. I love it!

-Izzie May
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