|Reviews for Rebekah|
| Pastorsdaughter18 6/16/09 . chapter 1
Wow...that's quite the poem. Well done.
| PoetryQueen 8/7/08 . chapter 1
Great job! This was very nice and you had a good motivation to write it. Lost in a whirl of night. This line is in the second stanza, it is a little confusing. Also, when you are talking about death in the first stanza, it makes you have to change gears from life to death a lot. If you move the first stanza to the end, it will sound a lot better. God Bless!
| ErosAndSunsets 4/7/07 . chapter 1
Nice rhyming... I always have trouble with that because I meake it sound as if I'm just putting in words to rhyme that don't really belong in the poem, but you have obviously overcome that obstacle. i like how it's simple, but heartfelt. i especially love the line "and you will live in water". it just sounds so peaceful. I also like how you progressed from her birth to her death. It makes the piece flow well. nice job!
| anna 3/3/07 . chapter 1
| barelyamiable 3/1/07 . chapter 1
Aww, how sweet.
My pastor was saying how the baptism of a brother or sister is the greatest cause for celebration last Sunday.
So, really, I am overjoyed.
I loved this poem, it was so beautifully written and I could see that you put a lot of thought into it.
I loved the third stanza, especially, because it's so true.
I'm beginning to value everything more and your work was just so moving.
May God bless you.
| B.T. Lines 3/1/07 . chapter 1
Very pretty! I love it! And yay for Rebekah's baptism!