This poem sounds like something this guy (that I love) could have written to this other girl... it's SO similar (seriously, even the tatoo part is true about that girl!) But anyways, I love the comparisons you made in this, it made this sound very soft and romantic.. Very nice job :D

Wow what a romantic you are _ I love this, I hope you find what your looking for(inless u alredy have it)

Kristie Marie

I like all of the metaphores and similes that you use, it brings a vibrance in language to it that is both descriptive and mysterious at the same time. The theme as a whole is a bit ambiguous (to me, at least), but I think it works fine that way because of the beauty in the language

interesting, I like the length to the sentences; it adds this sort of uniqueness to your writing.

The descriptions are simple but beautiful-i liked it a lot! _ write on!