vampire slash is fun for me.
you are certainly one of my favorite writers on fictionpress.

Oh. Angst.

And yay! More vamps. Gotta love vamps.

The ending is so...poetic. And emo...er...sad. I still like it.



...And by the way, if you haven't figured it out from the previous reviews...this is K-woo. ^_^

I liked this line a lot: "Adam's got his highbeams turned on, both to warn and beckon."

I think it describes his character well. Maybe that's what Patrick saw in Adam when they were together (I assume). Adam seems like the type of person to scare people off and at the same time intrigue them and make them stay, even if they're afraid.

That's a great part of your writing, I think. There's no statement like, "Adam sank his teeth into Jones's neck." The reader knows that this is how Jones died, but not because it was outwardly stated.

Your writing is not obvious, and I think that's I most enjoy about it.