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| dessertfirst 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseHeehee this story is enjoyable. The plot is extremely unrealistic (1. wolves are not that easy to kill, 2. your characters are constantly doing things that only make sense if they know what's going to happen next), but that doesn't matter too much. I like your characters, your Lost influences, and your dialogue; and I look forward to reading the next chapter. |
| miss masquerade 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseer... its a bit morbid but otherwise its really good... |