I really like this poem. It's very different from the kind of stuff I usual see. The style is really cool. Keep writing 'cause I love your style!!

-Kiro

Interesting, I like the concept and I love your use of the words carburetor and kaleidoscope. The last line really stands out to me also. This poem was sort of vague and I wasn't quite sure what it's about, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Maybe you were describing more of a mood than one specific thing. Or maybe I'm just dense. Eh, no matter. This was an intriguing read, keep writing!