Reviews for The Execution of the Heart

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Kura-sama 2008-06-24 ch 16,	abuseWonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it, it has an amazingly romantic and lovely storyline I especially loved the epilogue ... it leaves the story open for interpretation, and yet ties it back to the begining. Good job ^^
Aranalany 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abuseIt sure was a very nice fanfic. The first part was kinda confusing to me, somehow it didn't feel like it made much sense. But the second one was really awesome! Thanks for letting me read such a nice fanfic, keep it up =p
kalan 2008-02-07 ch 16, anon.	abuseYou should publish this story is great not many people have the talent you do. You should share you wonderful talent with others.
heartfeltlove 2008-02-06 ch 1,	abuseIntresting so far!
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2007-11-25 ch 15,	abuseOh my gosh that was so beautiful! and i have the ringing bells playing in the background. Aw! I don't know what to say! that was soo sweet! i'm crying...crap... that was truly beautiful. i love it.
Kadence 2007-07-06 ch 15,	abuseThat was great. ;) The ending was sad, but it fit so well. I'll be checking for more of your stories. T.M.L.
Paper Bag Ghost 2007-06-29 ch 15,	abuseAww... As much as I hate tragedies, this one was beautiful. I adore the ending!
lacy-9 2007-06-12 ch 15,	abuseaww...i just finished reading the whole thing...and it was really good! do you plan on starting another story soon?
Carmel March 2007-06-12 ch 16,	abuseThat was truly wonderful. You left it in a great spot. It left the reader thinking. I just want to say that I admire and respect you. It's terribly hard to complete a masterpiece like this. But you stuck to it, and look where it turned out! You are amazing. So, thank you for writing this, and I hope to see more from you soon! ~carm~
Faeya 2007-06-12 ch 3,	abuseAwh, he came to save her after all. Barney seems like a cool character, lol. The dancing image was pretty entertaining.
Faeya 2007-06-11 ch 2,	abuseAww, that's so cute. Lurve their interaction. It's like a kid with a grown up, which essentially is what it is, but still adorable.
Faeya 2007-06-07 ch 1,	abuseAlright, so first off, I don't like reviewing because I'm not very good about it, and I hope I don't sound like an idiot trying to give some constructive advice. It's probably your style, but I think you could take things at a slower pace, take some nice, long time into imputting lovely, lively details and not hurrying with getting to the next action. Of course, I'm not one to talk, and uh, yea, hope this is actually accurate, lol. At the end it also seems abrupt that he just takes her, no questions asked since he's a cold blooded murderer. I'm not too sure about grammar either, but I was kind of in a hurry, but I found "We have a deal then?" the King asked thrilled he would have the Executioner at his side fighting for his country. I think there should be a comma after asked, and that after thrilled. Remember to proof read (although I do want to stab proof reading with a dagger myself) if you don't already. Anyhoo, I've read a bit of chapter two and I'll get to that a bit later. Have to run to bed after working on my little project.
Fienty 2007-06-06 ch 1,	abuseI love this story! :D i love the story line and the writing is great! i was really dissapointed when i got to the end of chapter 13. I hope you write more! :)
Carmel March 2007-06-05 ch 13,	abuseHeya! Wow, I'm loving this. Whenever I read this story, it gives me this warm, fuzzy feeling :) Not many authors have the ability to completely capture my interest, but you've managed it. Great chapter, most likely my favourite. No specific reason. But all your chapters are amazing, so it's hard to say which is the best. I can't wait to read more of this! ~carm~
AutumnRain16 2007-06-04 ch 3,	abuseAh! He's so adorably in denial!! He so totally loveess her! It's so cute! Great chapter once again! Sincerely, Hopeless Romantic aka AutumnRain

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