I liked how the poem made a triangle at the bottom. :) And I liked the line "I feel I am motley."

Cute poem, but this is the sort of thing that you write for you and it doesn't affect anyone else. Which, there's no problem in that. I'm just saying. :P It's hard to review something like this because it's entire point is to be personal.

It reminds me a little of a poem I wrote.. Just with the contrast between the past and present people... although mine is very, uhm, chaotic.

I find tangible things that represent my past and current selves oftentimes.

I like how you bounce back and forth between the old you and the orestn you. I really liked your poem

Another flowing beautiful peice. God Bless
-Ivy Marie

Wow. I like finding yourself poems. Its so true. Everything changes. This is very well written and the emotion is strong. Very powerful piece!
Sorry it took me so long... But you are now on my favorite authors list... I kept meaning to check the box, but each time I reviewed, I'd forget again. :) But now I remembered! Yay!

Holy Novels, I feel that you have described me. Obviously you haven't done this intentionally, but it is still there.
This is very good. I like the style very much, the whole present-past vibe brings this to life and really shows the change you are describing.
Super job!

Falcon