Yay, I love this story and I love happy endings! Can you say "sequel" ?

Beautiful story i loved every bit of it :D

oh my god I loved it...it took me forever to ** read though because my internet will be working one minute then the next it would be out and I was like GR lol awesome story, I was worried about not being able to finish it then you thinking about trying to publish it (because it seems like a great book to be published) and taking it down because of that and all ^^ but I finished hehe

finally! I've been waiting for Jack to give it to Rafael...even if it was just barely

Forgot to review this story when I finished reading it. I still feel that everyone is too kind for it to be real but it's a nice change from evil angsty characters (though Morgan is one heap of angst by himself). I loved Nicky's sheme to make his lord admit his feelings at the end. That was brilliant. And the the fact that Rafael finnally got Jack was good after all the sexual tension you put us through. Thank you for the story.

oh dear i was supposed to be studying for finals next week you know. but this damn story sucked me in. i had it on my favorites list so i could read it after but it just sucked me right in. i will admit there were times i hated them all, yes even sweet nicky, and times i thought, well why not just have a foursome and be done with it, but mostly i really loved them and i can't believe original drama still existed, and that's the beauty of this story. you made me stick with them, and cheer for them, almost cry for them and want to smack them. things like this needs to get published and whatnot. it's wasted in fictionpress, getting buried under the high school nonsense and unfinished stories and ridiculous oneshots. but i'm sincerely thankful for it. i could rave some more but there are just no words for how much this story got me.

that was hands down the best sex scene i have ever read. definitely worth the last god knows how many hours i read this story straight from chapter one till now. oh. my. god.

I truly, truly, enjoyed this story. I loved the characters and drama and the details. Your writing and imagery is amazing. Jack was so lovable and hilarious. Nicky was so adorable and almost too good to be true - and yet it was believable. Morgan and Rafael were both wonderful characters - each with their own problems but with ideals and personalities that built the story so well. The only problem I had with the story was every once in a while there were words that seemed too modern for the setting - slang that took away from the setting and jerked me out of the story. Also, sometimes the level of the language didn't quite fit - sorry trying to explain - like sometimes Jack is looking at the scenery and your describing it from his point of veiw and suddenly there is a descriptive word that is perfect for the scene but seems overly flowerly language that, to me, I feel that Jack would never think to use to describe the scene. Sorry if that doesn't make sense. Also, maybe you could put lines or more space when there is a character change, because once in a while you would change characters and scenes and I would get so confused who was talking/thinking, and what the heck was going on. But I got used to it. Thanks for writing such a fabulous story - although I should be studying right now, I couldn't bear not to finish this story :D. I loved it!

I created a user account just so I could comment on this story. It is really amazing. I am astounded that you have not gotten more comments. This was a great story with amazingly thought out characters and a great drama that moves you to another time.

Ahh this story was wonderful...I hope you know I spent my whole day reading this, couldn't drag myself away to get anything accomplished haha. But honestly, this was great. I fell in love with all of the characters, even the "minor" ones, and I'm glad the story had an actual (sub?)plot besides all the romance, which, don't get me wrong, was amazing as well. I'm trying to pick a favorite character, or at least a favorite couple, but I'm so attached to all of them now! Well, maybe Jack would be my favorite :) Anyways, I can't remember the last time I enjoyed reading something so much...I can't wait to read your other stuff (as soon as I have another day I can justify wasting in front of my computer). Actually, um, *discrete cough* it would be great to maybe read some shorts about the main characters as they settle down in domestic bliss? Just throwing that out there ;)

I read this forever ago, but I reread the last chapter just now (instead of studying for calculus, bad me). I loved this story. The characters are so sincere and real. The only thing that I can think of that would improve it is if there were an actual love scene between Nicky and Morgan. That would've just been the cherry on top at the end. I enjoyed this story immensely. You are a very talented author.

I absolutely adored this! I can honestly say I spent the last three days reading it (it kept me greatly entertained while being stuck sick at home). My favourite couple was definitely Jack and Rafael. The tension between them and the amount of difficulty they had finally getting was a lot of fun. Plus Jack's prickly attitude was hilarious (I love him). Of course, Nicholas and Morgan were also adorable, despite how many times I wanted to smack the latter. But I guess that comes with being stuck in the past. He definitely redeemed himself with that last scene (which had me laughing a LOT). I could probably go on for hours and hours about how amazing this story is... I think it's one of the best romances I've read in a long time. I can't really think of anything to improve...it was consistent throughout plot-wise, and the ending was perfect... Ah, I'll probably start rambling if I keep going, so I'll end it here. I loved it a lot!

I like this story. The caracters are all a bit too gentle to be true (though it is not impossible that so many of them wold slock together like this, who knows) and the atmosphere is interesting, especially between Jack and Raphael. I look forward to reading the rest.

also, the jack-rafael smex was hot as hell ;)

Oh my lord...
That was amazing. I can't believe I never noticed this story before now! A wonderful, emotional, sweet, angsty and very very fulfilling read. Nicky's pain at having to hurt his lord against his wishes just about tore my heart in two.
Love love love love loved it!
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