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Red Masque 2007-03-15 . chapter 1
i'm about to have to go to class but... this is my new favorite : )

such an idea!! quel horreur, relocated? ugh i can hardly stand the image of clouds right now, let alone... but actually at the same time... sortof quaint and reassuring. weirdly enough. i'd probably make more sense if i'd been getting more sleep than poor Henry recently.

um... just gotta say, the last line could be my favorite line that you have ever written. i dunno what takes me so much in it, but even the diction connotes a sort of faraway dreamland...

ugh. bell rang.

c'est parfait
rm
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