You know, it's been a long time since I've read anything on here but I do remember some of the stuff I read of yours and it seems to me that you were really good before and have got better. ^_^

I liked the bit about motivating the sheep, and just generally liked the way that this was written and the fact that not every line had a rhyming couplet. It really worked well. Thanks.

:)
**Duckies

i like this.
i like this alot.
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