I really liked this.

I might have, however, used a word other than "nothingness", for the "-ness" suffix kind of detracts from the mood I believe has been created.

However, other than that, this was really good.

Really good poem, it flows well. Good job

I like it. It sounds similar to someone i know. I love the first few lines especially. :P

I like it, but I don't think I get the ending. "Queen of nothingness"... I'll have to think on that one.

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This was weird. I don't think I really get it. In a weird sort of way I do, but I don't really get who it's about. Great job anyway.

I like It. But i just help but wonder who came up with the title? Oh well. Lol jk. ya!

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