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Scribe Of All Trades
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseagain, very nice...

"No, that's too commited"

I love that part.
hear my cry
2007-05-01
ch 1,
abusethis is going in my favorites. it's kind of exhilarating to read, though that might be the wrong word ...

anyways, thanks for reading that poem
Almah
2007-04-12
ch 1,
abuseThis poem is sort of sexy and I'm not sure why. :-)
random
2007-04-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've read a few of your "poems" now...just one bad, boring cliche after another.

Even your profile is poorly written and cliche. Not surprising.
no.peace.los.angeles
2007-03-04
ch 1,
abuseI love the sound of this piece - it really works well in communicating this almost desperate feeling. Love that. Keep writing! :)
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