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| gossipgalmishi (username) 2008-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseyea, its sad how some treat others. its a very emotional story because it happens to some that are unfortunate... |
| CiaoMonAmi 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseI like this a lot, actually. I like the brutal truth of it, and the mocking tone to it. It's real, not just something you can laugh off, you know? |
| gummybearmurder 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseWow. I realize that most everyone else that's reviewed said the same thing, but this was written beautifully. It DID touch me, and it was very eye opening. It was amazing how connected I felt to it, because I've been made fun of before, also. Extremely good job. |
| Wee-hoo 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseVery good story. I actually got chills... I hate bullies they don't understand the pain they cause.. Thank you for a good read and I do hope that you get this published. |
| just a ray of sunshine 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abusewow. just... wowowow. that was amazing. |
| ecwix 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI love the use of 2nd person. The voice in this work is very original and seems as though the work is talking to the reader, which improves the message. An interesting work. |
| Silent Freak 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is so incredibly sad =[ But I loved it. I added it to my favorites. I get picked on a lot in school because I have a social disorder. It's not my fault, but they make fun of me for that, and other things that have gone on in my life. It really hurts. I'd honestly rather be beaten up than verbally bashed everyday. You really hit the nail on the head with this story. VERY good job =) |
| happysmiley474 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseall i can say is, WOW. this sends a really powerful message. definetelty going onto my favs... keep up the good work. PLEASE. |
| .. 2007-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour story was really good! I like the whole theme about laughing. |
| RJ 2007-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, I'm gonna be honest. I thought this was great. It had a good message, and the way it was written sounded so cool. It was pretty depressing, but you made it so good. People do pick on each other, but if something like that happened, would they be laughing? As you said, I think not. Very good, I enjoyed this a lot. |