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| sin olvido 2007-03-02 ch 1,  | abuseGreat meaning; the rhymes were a little iffy, though. |
| JessieJean 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseGenerally, that's a nice poem. Sometimes the rymphing could get a little corny, but overall, I like it. Forgetting the pain and moving on, eh? Good job on the poem!! |